I am not a poet. This is my first shot at it, so I probably made some mistakes, but here it is:
Scripture References;
6Seek ye the LORD while he may be found, call ye upon him while he is near: 7Let the wicked forsake his way, and the unrighteous man his thoughts: and let him return unto the LORD, and he will have mercy upon him; and to our God, for he will abundantly pardon. Isaiah 55:6-7 KJV
11For the Son of man is come to save that which was lost. 12How think ye? if a man have an hundred sheep, and one of them be gone astray, doth he not leave the ninety and nine, and goeth into the mountains, and seeketh that which is gone astray? 13And if so be that he find it, verily I say unto you, he rejoiceth more of that sheep, than of the ninety and nine which went not astray. 14Even so it is not the will of your Father which is in heaven, that one of these little ones should perish. Matthew 18:11-14 KJV
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Hide and Seek: A Portrait of Mercy by Theresa Anne Moore
Out among the shadows,
Crouched low behind a tree,
I hoped no one would find me.
I hoped no one could see
The frightened little child
Who happened to be me.
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I really was ashamed
And just a little scared
That the things I had been up to
Might suddenly be aired,
And it would be quite obvious
That I had grossly erred.
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Idle thoughts and fancies,
Dark musings in my head,
The unkind words that weren’t restrained,
The list of vices that stained,
I knew they couldn’t be explained.
“They couldn’t be explained”,
The mournful chorus refrained.
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I wanted to run to my house
To my favorite place to hide,
But I knew that I would be spied,
So I gave up hope and cried.
I felt helpless and small like a mouse.
There was no one on my side.
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Then I heard a whimper.
I looked up in surprise.
Not far from where I was crouching
Was someone just my size.
That someone also was crouching,
Tears falling from her eyes.
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She drew her breath in sharply
As soon as she saw me.
Then we both nodded knowingly.
It was plain to her and me,
We shared the same dilemma.
Then we both were so relieved…
To hear “Olly olly oxen free”!
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Heather said,
January 8, 2012 at 5:04 am
I appreciated being able to read your poem, Theresa. And I like it.
Is it not fascinating how knowing Christ’s merciful forgiveness allows us to drop pretenses and learn to extend love to others?
Moore to ponder said,
January 8, 2012 at 5:15 am
Thank you, Heather. It is fascinating. I had to re-post it over and over, because every time I got it spaced the way I wanted it, it would change every time I hit “publish”. Each stanza was supposed to have 6 lines.
Linda Kruschke said,
January 8, 2012 at 5:09 am
Theresa, Excellent first poem! I love it. I didn’t see a single mistake. 😉 I especially like the end – hearing our dear Jesus call “Olly olly oxen free” is so wonderful. Can’t wait for the next one. Peace, Linda
Moore to ponder said,
January 8, 2012 at 5:16 am
Thank you, Linda!
Lisa Marie harmon said,
January 8, 2012 at 6:23 am
Great poem!
Moore to ponder said,
June 9, 2012 at 10:11 pm
I can’t believe I never saw this comment until today! Thank you, Lisa.
Debbie said,
January 8, 2012 at 7:30 am
You got skills, you poet you! 🙂 Truly, this blessed me. It reminded me of Adam and Eve hiding in the garden. And it reminded me of His mercy and grace and forgiveness clothing us. Loved the ending!!! And the scripture!!! God bless you woman of the Word and poems!
love and prayers!
deb
Moore to ponder said,
January 8, 2012 at 11:23 am
Thank you so much, Deb.
Love,
Theresa
Ann said,
January 8, 2012 at 8:42 pm
Thanks, Theresa!
Wonderful 🙂 (Certainly didn’t read like a first poem to me either!!)
Funny how we think we’re all alone in our situations … great to know He will never leave.
Blessings,
ann
Moore to ponder said,
January 8, 2012 at 10:33 pm
Well, I have written songs, but I don’t know the the proper way to write the different types of poetry. I just wrote from my heart, and what I have been feeling lately. 🙂
Blessings,
Theresa
Linda said,
January 9, 2012 at 5:07 am
I had no idea you had dark voices in your head (like me). This is such a beautiful and honest first poem. And it’s really, really good.
I’m always comforted by your words, because I can always relate.
Keep writing, Theresa the poet! ; )
Moore to ponder said,
January 9, 2012 at 5:27 am
Oh yeah, sure do have those dark voices to contend with…horrible creepy thoughts. Thank goodness the Lord silences them when it gets to be too much.
I relate to you, too. The refuge I have found at times in your candor, and the hope you instill with your faith. 🙂
Thank you so much for the encouragement!
Hugs,
Theresa
bendedspoon said,
January 10, 2012 at 5:59 am
Your first poem? Wow! And what can I say to your next and the next? Wow! Wowow!
I love your poem because I can totally relate to it. I have been hiding most of my life — from myself, from others, and I am afraid from God too but of course He not only finds me but stays with me and leads me out.
Hugggs and love to you Theresa Anne. Now I know why you love Anne of Green Gables 🙂
Moore to ponder said,
January 10, 2012 at 10:37 am
We have many things in common. 🙂
Love,
Theresa
Caddo Veil said,
January 16, 2012 at 8:52 pm
This is SO Wonderful, Theresa! And you Are a Poet! I LOVE the “mournful” (condemning) refrain–and then the olly olly oxen Free! I can only repeat, this is so wonderful.
This is my first visit here, courtesy of Deb’s blog–my Spirit Sister. You’ve done a lovely job with offering God’s gift to everyone! May He richly bless you today!
Moore to ponder said,
January 16, 2012 at 9:56 pm
I am so glad you stopped by! Thank you so much for the compliment.
Deb is one of those creatures with “beautiful feet” (Isaiah 52:7) I believe their pitter patter is a sound that is music both to the Lord’s ears and to the ears of those who listen to her poems. 🙂
I can’t wait to come visit your blog!
Blessings,
Theresa
Caddo Veil said,
February 11, 2012 at 2:32 am
I so agree with you about our sis, Deb! Thanks for stopping by my blog today, Theresa–did I tell you that you share my “saintly” cousin’s name?!
I also wanted to say, I think it’s wonderful that you offer Bibles through Bible Gateway to those who may be newly “seeking”–I think I’ll check it out, just to see what’s available online. I wonder what the Apostle Paul would think of Internet missionaries?!! God bless you today.
Debbie said,
June 10, 2012 at 2:42 am
I had to come back and read again . . .and remember we all have each other and God, and I don’t have to hide! Love you, Theresa!
Moore to ponder said,
June 10, 2012 at 2:52 am
Love you, too, Deb!
coastalmom said,
June 20, 2014 at 8:27 pm
Thank YOU for guiding me here! I absolutely love this! YOU need to write more poetry 😉
Moore to ponder said,
June 20, 2014 at 9:14 pm
Thank you, Diane! I hope to..
Love and blessings,
Theresa
Moore to ponder said,
March 11, 2015 at 4:40 am
Reblogged this on Moore to Ponder and commented:
This one almost comes across like a child’s poem, but I love children’s poetry, so I’m really not surprised.
Debbie said,
March 12, 2015 at 2:00 am
This got to me all over again, Theresa! Thank you thank you thank you! And I love children’s poems too! God bless you, dear woman of the Word!
Moore to ponder said,
March 12, 2015 at 7:14 am
Thank you so much, Deb!
Hugs and Blessings,
Theresa
nataliescarberry said,
March 12, 2015 at 1:50 am
I love your poems. You need to keep writing them. Love and hugs, N ❤ 🙂
Moore to ponder said,
March 12, 2015 at 7:11 am
Oh Natalie, that means so much to me! Thank you!
Hugs and Blessings,
Theresa
Cynthia Reyes said,
March 16, 2015 at 5:43 pm
What a beautiful, strong poem you wrote. Well done.
Moore to ponder said,
March 16, 2015 at 9:15 pm
Thank you so much, Cynthia!
Hugs and blessings,
Theresa
Wifey Monologue said,
March 17, 2015 at 10:04 pm
How I liked the way it rhymes. So fluent and smooth!
Moore to ponder said,
March 17, 2015 at 10:42 pm
Thank you so much!
Blessings,
Theresa
Wendy L. Macdonald said,
March 23, 2015 at 5:38 pm
Theresa, it’s hard to believe this was your first poem. You captured the essence of a soul stained with sin and the sweet release of it. I hope you continue to write poems. I’ve always appreciated how much can be said with so few words.
Blessings ~ Wendy ❀
Moore to ponder said,
March 23, 2015 at 6:20 pm
Thank you so much, Wendy!
I had written some songs. Most were over 20 years ago. This was my first shot at a poem, though.
There are times when I feel moved and seem to be able to crank them out, and then long dry spells. My devotional blogging is like that, too.
Blessings,
Theresa